Monday, January 17, 2011

About poetry

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In school we are learning poetry. I don't know poetry, but i think poetry is sharing their feeling with other people. Last time we went out and write a poetry. It was hard to think. because it was hot and i don't like to share my feeling with people. So our class talked about the wall. I understand 80% about the wall. because i have wall too. So I agree that people are scared to open up. In poetry i want to learn how to write my feeling. and i want to learn about my wall.

Sunday, January 16, 2011

Welcome to grammer! Writing sample



I think I was a risk-taker. Because I was trying to learn new thing and explore situation. Last time I made my story book and I read to grade 1, it was fun, so I think was brave when I was reading story to grade 1, but I worried little bit about my picture. Because I was bad at drawing. So I was little bit embarrassed about my picture.

So I think I was a risk-taker, but not a perfect risk-taker. And while I was drawing my storybook it was hard and messy, but it was fun. Because I was enjoying drawing the story book and I felt so good to read my story book to grade 1. Grade 1 kids were very cute, So I think I was a risk-taker.